Narrative Idea's

First Idea
A chief detective has been called in to solve the hardest murder to ever to be seen. He then calls in his brother, who is also a detective, to help him solve the murder. After several hours of long hard work they find out that the victim had an enemy who can not answer any of the question where he was when the murder took place, they then bring him into police custardy. Then whilst he was in his cell waiting to be sentenced the suspect gets killed. They then have a lead that both bullets that killed the victim and the suspect was fired from the same gun because of the markings on the bullet. Then the chief detective then finds out it was his brother that killed both of the people, and he then come to near death because he brother doesn't want anyone to no what happen. But the chief detective gets free and knocks his brother out  then later sentences him to life in prison for two murders and a near murder. As as the audience then find out that the two people that died worked in a weed business with the brother, and because they mucked up in what the customers wanted and lost a lot of money it resulted in death for both of them.

Second Idea
There is a women detective and she is known for her good work. Then one day when she finished late at the office someone tries to mug her, the person had a black mask on so she is unable to see there face. She fights them off but goes a bit to far and it results in the mugger getting killed. Then the next day she gets called into work for a crime scene in a house with a man that died with internal bleeding. As she investigates the crime scene she finds out that a hair that was found on the victims jacket was her hair, then she figures out that she was the murder and that victim was the man that tried to mug her. Then audience then see a flash back of what happen after she ran away, the man then gets up and goes back to his home and later on dies on internal bleeding in the brain and body. Once she knows that she is the killer she then starts to go mental trying to hide the fact that she killed the man, which results her going to a mental home then going into a mental asylum because she ends up confessing that she was the murderer.

We then decided that we would go with are first narrative idea because it has more potential with an opening to keep the audience on edge and wanting to no more.